Title: Fireworks on a Rush!
I think fireworks shouldn't be illegal because they are traditional activities that people take part of. Although fireworks are great fun for everyone. It is a health hazard. It can cause a fire or get someone hurt. We don't want that to happen but I feel like this doesn't happen often enough for government to bann it entirely. Yes, I agree its unsafe and not something that shouldn't be taken seriously. These mishappenings don't happen a lot and shouldn't result in the governments stopping of them completely. On the other side, fireworks do entertain a lot of people. To them, its tradition to set these big fireworks up and see it light up in the sky. They like the way it makes them feel and it sends off that vibrant rush of the New Years or Fourth of July. Compared to never seeing this at all to getting to see it twice a year is so worth it.
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Hi Kelly,
ReplyDeleteYou have a definite opinion here, but it could be stated and supported more clearly. There are a lot of shifts in person (third, second, first) and some subject-verb agreement errors. You also need a good title, catchier than "Pro/Con on Fireworks."
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